Fernando Nee
Saturday, August 13, 2011
Is this a run-on sentence?
Nope, that sounds really good. I might use "gradually" instead of "consistently." That's more of style choice though; the grammar's good, and you couldn't really trim it down and still include everything you need to say.
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